Loveless Biker Boys

Hi! This game is well made but i feel like it might be too much for ppl under 18!
it would be best to up that age marker and maybe add a content warning or 2 about some of the more intense stuff in the game! 

it was quite the shocker! and you wouldn't want to accidently traumatize some cereous 13 yr old lol

OK I FOUND IT its called "youre alive" by Rory in early 20s. its so underrated omg

I love the art and I love the character design. My only critique is that i wish we got to see the biker world a bit more. Or maybe less build up to it? I think the story telling is really well done, but it felt a little flat to have our interactions end so quickly after having the world be built up so much. 

literally clawing up the curtains i love jatay so much (hes silly in a good way))

Эта игра прекрасная! Очень не хватало подобного, спасибо автору! Однако, существует ли где-нибудь список со всеми концовками, чтобы периодически сравнивать своё количество концовок с существующим? Был бы очень благодарен, если кто-то ответить. Спасибо!❤

это прекрасно, но у меня есть проблема. Я прошла несколько концовок с другими персонажами и прошла проходить путь с Джефом и у меня вылезла ошибка сюжета. Я расстроилась и продолжала играть(  играть можно было, но после каждого тыка ошибка снова появлялась) и вот решила с Джефом нсфв концовочку начинаю сначала ввожу имя Дюк дохожу до опроса и у меня вылетает. Как я понимаю вылетает когда мне попадается Джефф, потому что мне несколько раз выдавали путь с Джатаем. Главный вопрос че делать помогите пж я хочу посмотреть нсфв концовку с Джефем😭

Super freaky, i loved it!

i felt really bad for Varai when he told me the eyelicking story. 

i finely got all the endings

I got bad endings from other bikers for reasons, but somehow got a bad engding from Jatay. So I guess it's probably because he's mentally unstable lol

Playing this was such a horrible experience

I can't get the Duke ending

although I still do love the game 😁

i swear i have every ending but one, legit every last one even had to watch muitiple videos and even used the ending guide 

I spent like 10 minutes deciding wich one was my favourite in Padar ending JAJA

there will be a mobile version

where can i send fanarts - this game fills me with inspirations akwndoiawd i love it .

я люблю это дерьмо очень сильно

hello your game I am very interested would it be possible to translate the game into French if you are interested

This was amazing, disturbed yet also heavily intrigued me, I had so much fun playing all the endings!! I love all of these heavily odd men !! Especially Varai <3 wurm boy. Got Jaytay my first playthrough and WHEW he was interesting. Your art is so cute!! Padar naked is a treat! mweheheh

it will have an android version

你的人物看起来怪异的可爱，对于我这种人来说，他们真的是太棒了，我将来会画画的，我想用这样的画风来画画，我真的是好喜欢他们，他们很可爱，我想对他们说一些奇怪的话，如果可以的话，我会把他们按在地上，做这样奇怪的事情。我真的很喜欢他们

I really love your game and I'm looking forward to new stuff. You certainly have a unique and grubby style. Very sweaty, smelly, and bloody. I really love the gross boys and I hope to see more of them in the future.

Gonna give you my most honest feedback, because I see potential in your work and with the right adjustments you'd be capable of nothing short than masterpieces
- You have a really unique and captivating art style, however I really suggest taking the time to refine the art and produce the same or at least similar quality of work for the art used in the cg scenes (i know you've drawn them on your phone, though for future reference it would be best to match a similar kind of quality throughout the game), especially focusing on perfecting the perspectives and anatomy, because it really is a shame some of the drawings have good composition and detail but certain anatomy flaws ruin the scene :(
- When it comes to the overall atmosphere in the game, it is depressing and captivating in the most comforting way, like a sweet, sickly and intoxicating environment that you're aware is in the streets/garage and away from the safety of your home, but still offers a sense of belonging and calm you would feel walking back home at night after an emotional breakdown (or at the very least a few routes with calmer characters like Varai and Jeff made me feel that way).
- One thing I would be careful about is how you convey certain shocking content, not necessarily for the disturbing nature of it, but whether it is done in good taste or only for the sake of shock value.
Knowing that Jeff has been described multiple times as "the most sane member of the group", he has morally  one of the most disturbing bad endings of all the members that shows how ironic this descriptor of him is. I don't know whether it was intentional or not, however I believe that it devalued the character greatly, as in the end seems like Dice or even Varai, are truly the most sane and down to earth members in comparison.
Certain developments throughout the routes seem to have a sort of forced set of writing choices and twists regarding disturbing and gorey content, which would be delightful had it been unraveled at a slower and maybe more realistic pace. Unfortunately, most of the long lasting shock and anguish that some disturbing real life stories and occurrences leave you with, comes from how human the emotions are before, during or after the event, along with realistic reasoning and regret that might precede or follow an erratic action. I honestly have not seen any of that in Jeff's bad ending, every bit of common sense or doubt about being mistaken was forcibly removed in order for those things to happen, which is highly unrealistic for someone who is supposed to be a reasonable and controlled person, all of this pretty much left me with a really bad impression. Even Jatay's routes were better paced and written, in my opinion.
I have also seen some unflattering changes in the story's pace in other routes, that made the situations feel more ridiculous and unrealistic (or "edgy" in other words) than intriguingly disturbing.
I would really suggest working on the delivery of these topics and focus on a quieter shock, which is ensured to leave you with questions and stick with you longer than a quick blast into the degeneracy.

All in all, I did like the game with its ups and downs, I keep remembering about it from time to time, mainly because I secretly craved for the existence of a similar experience and the characters are pretty memorable, so you definitely did plenty of things right with your work.

I'd be glad if my feedback helps you in the slightest  :)
I really hope you will keep working on more projects, because I look forward to see what you will come up next.

Where can i find the ending guide ??? :(

I played all the routes and nothing with padar happened. I used the ending guide and followed it to a t. could i get some help?

varai is so cute that i just wanna hug him and give him a kiss on the cheek!!!!!!!

Прошла всех трех, остался Джатай, дико затянуло на самом деле, хочу узнать что там с Пьядаром, но возникли трудности. А как концовку с Джатаем "Мясной рай" получить? Делаю все идентично по гайду, но не выхожу на нее. Ну вот никак. Может, проблема в том, что мне Дайс изначально сказал, что Джатай мне по характеру не подходит, хоть я на старика и вышла? В этом есть какая-то закономерность?

UPD. Я играю в дополнение 18+ 

My brother enter my room and ask if i want to join pillow fight with his friend WHEN I IN THE COMMON TONGUE ENDING.I dont know how my brother feel probably disappointing :)))

*Noodles is my nickname

How to get Jatay's route ??? i play like 14-17 times but i only got Dice  Jett and Varai routes ( im not good at english bcz is not my language .SORRY ! )